The backward cake

 The backward cake

Before

  

Golden frosting lit the detailed masterpiece, it glowed with sprinkles. The fondant flowers had every unique detail! The candles are perfectly crafted onto the side of the cake. The geode crystals aka rock candy sticking out perfectly textured! The glitter gives the masterpiece an extra shine to top it off. The icing Swirls matching the style of it in light blue pastel buttercream. There were pipings dripping down the side of the concoction making a fabulous drip effect. Chocolate blocks sticking to the side of the magnificent work.

After

It was what Katie had imagined, but there was a difference between dreams and reality. Katie was 14 and Sophie was 12. It was their mum's birthday and they planned to make her a cake while their dad took her out for dinner. Instead, there were cake splats over the floor and walls with sprinkles to the top! The fondant stretched and wrapped across every surface. The sink was flooded and the windows baked with egg. Katie and Sophie were on their hands and knees scrubbing their life away. The two girls heard the key rattle in the door, they heard people in the hall, it was like being in the terminator!

Reflection:

I enjoyed making up the story in my book

I found it hardest to review my work and change it

Next time I will divide it up better